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Sweet Sunrise

Some lose faith in God Because he cannot be seen. Yet the sweet sunrise Occurs perpetually Whether it’s cloudy or not! © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/12/2013 9:13:00 AM

Great write, Harry. Good comparison. I love it :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/6/2012 5:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Francine's "Short and Sweet" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/5/2012 4:55:00 PM

True. It's never partly sunny for the sun is a constant. Well done, Harry! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Happy New Year! Caroline.

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/4/2012 3:13:00 PM

i see God everywhere. hear him feel him. if he's in my food i must savor it. and sweet perfume must be his smell. HE'S EVERY WHERE.

Janet Vick

Date: 1/4/2012 10:40:00 AM

Your words are so true. That sunrise for Faith is there and waiting, no matter how many storms we pass through. Take care. Janet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2012 9:08:00 PM

Re-reading this beauty. And I can see your point about a class society and the use of language! Let me see if I can find a poem of yours I have never read before.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/2/2012 5:24:00 PM

Wonderful tanka! Keep up the excellent work and have a great 2012. Always, Laura

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/2/2012 5:00:00 PM

Makes me think of all the other things that have no explanation too Harry; and how special can that be. Maybe we know something some of the others don't!! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/2/2012 10:51:00 AM

How did I miss this gem Harry ;) I really love your message in this one!! Hope 2012 will be a great year for you and thanks for the honor of being a favorite.. Love Wilma

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/2/2012 7:55:00 AM

love it- you know our God!

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/29/2011 7:15:00 PM

congrats on your win Harry, wonderful tanka

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2011 6:27:00 PM

That is an excellent way to portray faith in God, Harry. Congratulations for your win with this well developed tanka!

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/29/2011 4:56:00 PM

So true. Congrats on your win, Harry! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 12/29/2011 12:45:00 PM

Harry congratulations on your win.Love it.

Debra Squyres

Date: 12/29/2011 11:50:00 AM

This is so true...God shines through always. Congrats on the win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/29/2011 9:24:00 AM

Wise and thoughtful words. Congratulations Harry. Love, Joyce

David Williams

Date: 12/29/2011 9:24:00 AM

Harry congrats on your win..David

Red Fiery

Date: 12/29/2011 9:15:00 AM

yes !I agree with these beautiful wrds....whether it's cloudy or nt ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2011 1:10:00 PM

Truth well spoken..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 12/28/2011 10:31:00 AM

This is truly beautiful Harry! Also, check my latest blog-you won a yearend PS award voted by members of our site-It's a good one too :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/28/2011 9:18:00 AM

Beautiful and sweet Sunrise. It's true sweet Sunrise occurs perpetually, nice. Enjoyed it. bl

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/27/2011 3:50:00 PM

Nice write Harry. There is just one thing I've noticed that everybody else missed: You have six syllables in the first line which is one too many. The word "folk" appears expendable. Elimination of that word will bring the number of syllables in the first line down to five.

Daver Austin

Date: 12/27/2011 2:07:00 PM

Good form and good write, Harry. Happy New Year. daver

Judy Ball

Date: 12/27/2011 12:26:00 PM

Excellent point my friend. It reminds me of something I heard once about an athiest who said he has been to outer space but never seen God so He must not exist. Someone else answered him and said,"That's like an ant inthe States stickinng his head out of his hole in the ground and saying he sees no Khruschef so there must not be one." Don't know if that's how you spell that name but you get the idea. lol God Bless, JB

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/27/2011 11:40:00 AM

Hi Harry...this is a very well constructed tanka...God shows up every day, doesn't He? Love the theme and the delivery here...science is God's greatest disguise, huh? Gwendolen