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Sweet Sun

A beautiful bowl burning to brighten our world , lends light to leaves and lilies; got glee-giving glow. The nurse of nature at noon!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/7/2011 11:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. As I have told others on this site, I am very much a rookie at this kind of thing. I thought at first the article is something Jim Morrison might write for a Doors song if he were alive. It occured to me later that I was decribing me. Putting myself under a microscope is a long time practice but I do appreciate your words.
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Date: 3/7/2011 2:00:00 PM
Wow wow, beautiful alliteration with lovely thoughts on the blessings of the sun, Adeleke
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Date: 3/7/2011 7:44:00 AM
you said it correctly in the first line. "bold and beautiful".
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Date: 3/7/2011 1:24:00 AM
beautiful tanka with lovely alliteration.
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