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Sweet Sugar Cookies and Peanut Butter Bars

"I dream of Candy!" Sweet cakes and peanut butter squares A living diabetic's nightmare. -- My heart sings to the beat, Under the Neutron Star Crunch Sweet sugar cookies and peanut butter bars Taunting whoopers, Dancing dum dum's, The sweetest silhouette show - in my room Dreamy, Creamy Cupcakes in the afternoon Cinnamon Cheerios cascade on my spoon Sweeter than my sweet tooth Now and later - a forever honeymoon Jigglin' my jelly belly boo berry Butterfinger delight I'm in love, licking the icy ICEE all night long Extra freshness, once I crop a top off of a mountain dew pop My eyes sparkle like diamond dazzle razzles in the sky I LIVE to fabricate my very own sugar extract R.E.M. Sleep Savoring the sound of saliva trapped in my mouth THIS night - ovulated buds - wait to feast! Enjoying delicious dulce music sleepy symphony Braggin' and embracin' a pinata pillow escapade Enchanted by a cotton candy crave - calling my name Lalaloopsy licorice and lemonade tea The best-wet dream I've ever seen Marshmallows of solitude dulcify every fresh fantasy Enticing in a bright slushy skittles daydream freeze One fat sunny bowl of cereals and cane Crackerjack spell --- chocolate chip swirls, Caramel lumps constipate the brain Sizing - peanuts and in a popcorn party payday Wrigley's wild winter Spearmint Breath parade Give me, give me, some Gummy bear Dessert ---------"Another Fruit Ninja hair DAY!" Watermelon Taffy stuck on the top of my gums Swallowing the whiteness in a whistle pop bar I FELL LIKE A SWEET SUGAR STAR!!! Glaze of glory erupts deep down my throat 24/7 Bubblicious, mint twist, Sunkist the best Twizzler breakfast Yummy in my twinkie tummy, drooling over frosted flakes One more strawberry smoothie 44 oz cup Counting each and every Pez popping'' up Goodnight light, It's time to get lost under the midnight moon pie sky SELF- Huggin'' and snugglin'' to a new sugar rush high :-D

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Date: 2/8/2023 6:59:00 PM
I just drop by to this page because I missed you Linda.. I miss reading your sweet and supportive comments on everyone poem and tbh.. PS isnt the same without you..
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Date: 8/3/2016 12:29:00 PM
Sooo delicious !!!
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:47:00 PM
Warning, this well written poem is the leading cause of diabetes on poetry soup! :P I was smiling with glee like a kid reading this and my eyes lit up more and more as it went on to the point where now I have to go drink an iced tea and get a sugar fix haha I had to stop buying EVERYTHING in anything bigger then a tiny package because I will eat all candy/sugar till its completely gone or i am sick its a proven fact :P Great write this took a lot of organization and clever wording!
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Date: 4/28/2016 6:20:00 AM
Very beautiful fusion of words. Well titled poem with very nice concept. Very brilliant write. Truly impressive. I adore ur skill. It is my great pleasure to enjoy ur poems................loved always. Manmath.
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Date: 4/10/2016 7:09:00 AM
Schneikies! Agreed, Linda! I hear moonpies come in different flavors now too! if only they weren't chemically flavored! Good one! Jimbo
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Date: 3/28/2016 12:39:00 PM
Linda, EXCELLENT, I got a sugar rush just reading this wonderfully written poem !
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:30:00 PM
I'm getting a sugar high just reading it. Love it
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Date: 2/24/2016 1:45:00 AM
Love it :)
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:06:00 PM
Sorry Linda, a seven and a gastronomic fave from me....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:00:00 PM
Hi Linda, i do it to myself, i read the name of the poem, i come in knowing that after reading this sweet treat i shall have to head for the kitchen. No self control, that's me. I Loved this sweet treat Linda. It just did read as a dream to me as i followed each line. I could just visualize..... Point me the way to the kitchen. Loved it Linda. Love....Vladislav.
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Date: 12/10/2015 9:34:00 AM
This a wonderful musical sounding poem, Linda!
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Date: 9/18/2015 9:47:00 AM
Oh my god! You had me sold in the first and second verse. I love alliteration to the fullest, and your performance was the truest. Im not one to make comments on a popular trend, but this one i couldn't resist. Well done. Plus I have a sweet tooth as well.
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:10:00 PM
Dear Linda This commit is easy, COOKIES ROCK FOREVER, CHERI
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Date: 7/24/2015 8:06:00 PM
Yummy, a scrumptious write! You have fed me so well on sweets, so who needs supper now ? A 7. Thanks for visiting my fish poem.~~~Darlene
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:30:00 PM
I love your poetry on a sunny afternoon.
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:11:00 AM
Love this. Boy, howdy, can I relate! My sonnet, "Potluck Dinner" won $100 in the annual "Burning the Midnight Oil" contest.
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Date: 3/28/2015 4:55:00 AM
Your Poem is so beautiful.. You write really well :) all your poems have a meaning,!! really it's astounding :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 4:54:00 AM
Your Poem is so beautiful.. You write really well :) all your poems have a meaning,!! really it's astounding :)
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Date: 3/16/2015 1:26:00 PM
I have given up refined sugar, so I suppose I'll have to imbibe vicariously through your sweet poem. ~T~
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Date: 3/9/2015 3:45:00 AM
An absolutley Truely Scrumptious delight that you have served up with this wonderful write. I think that if Hansel and Gretle knew what was on offer at your place the gingerbread house would have taken a big miss. Willy Wonka move over! I loved it from start to finish, just as well i am not a dentist. love Shane xxx
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Date: 3/8/2015 3:03:00 PM
A fun, youthful write, PD. Thanks for sharing the sugar rush!
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Date: 2/22/2015 2:44:00 AM
A sludge of creativeness, sweet enough for me to be tempted to digest it more for my leisure. I love it. :)
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:51:00 AM
Wonderfully written. I see treats galore, and more; but the point is, you're super creative, PD. Lovely weekend to you.
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Date: 2/15/2015 6:43:00 PM
We certainly can indulge in your luscious picture poem. Thank you!
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Date: 2/2/2015 6:56:00 AM
Hi Linda, thank you for the warm welcome to poetry soup, I love this piece and look forward to reading more. I think I have already checked out your competition! I'll see what I can do ;) All the best, K
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