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Sweet Sorrow

Secretly I cherish each moment Serenely I wish for a renewal Whimsically my adornment sways with the breeze As softly and tearily I recall each past liase Sweet serendipity completes this abysmal morrow As I recount my blessings despite my sorrow

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Deneen White

Date: 10/8/2008 3:03:00 PM

there are always hidden blesssings soemtimes we just need to take a moment to realize them through the sorrows, great write and thanks for your comments, take care D-ncye

Sara Lokken

Date: 10/7/2008 11:34:00 AM

Very beautiful expression, with a positive ending.:) Thanks for your comments. Love, Sara

James Foulk

Date: 10/6/2008 10:53:00 AM

a great piece of work, enjoyable read. thank you for reading my colorful leaves falling and for your comment.

Brian Strand

Date: 10/6/2008 7:06:00 AM

The best way to lokk at things Fathima.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/5/2008 11:48:00 AM

And one of your great blessings , Fathima , is your wonderful ability to create , with words...

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/5/2008 6:37:00 AM

Bittersweet write. Beautifully expressed by a most talented poetess. Wishing you new and wonderful memories to create in a brighter tomorrow holding love. Love, Shar

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 10/5/2008 1:02:00 AM

Calm and so touchy! Its more important to recall all the blessings than anything else. Simply very beautiful. Love and blessings, Chitra