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Sweet Seduction

[Verse 1] My blood is ice inside your veins Crawling underneath my skin The price we pay to earn that name The battle that we never win Falling faster far below Further into darkest depths The kiss of death that you bestow The poison that is on your…lips [Chorus] Sweet seduction Drug addiction Words that only he can mend Sweet seduction My affliction Rise to only meet the end [Verse 2-change] Your thoughts they plant a grave in me Like missiles shooting through the skies The pain you watch but never see Crystals falling from my eyes Your words they feel like razor blades Your touch like acid on the skin Your love this agonizing pain The battle that I’ll never…win [Chorus] [Breakthrough] Swallowed up by Sounds of screaming Asking questions Without meaning Fall away… FADE AWAY!!!! [Chorus] Sweet seduction Drug addiction Words that only he can mend Your destruction My affliction Rise to only meet the end The end…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/29/2012 3:40:00 AM
An amazing write!!! INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 1/5/2012 5:32:00 PM
Dear Laura, YOU are a Superb POETESS, Please read my POEM " I was Addicted " I'm not sure what Page its on I'll let YOU know later YOU are my Inspiration LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/5/2012 8:04:00 PM
I am looking for the poem you asked me to read, but unfortunately I cannot find it. Perhaps I will come across it as I read through all your poems. Always, Laura
Date: 11/4/2011 12:00:00 AM
* “I Felt As Though I Were The Phantom of The Opera Were Somehow A Part of This Excellent Creation & Stirring Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Laura * Your Beauties Last Stanza Is Powerful * Can Be Viewed Amid A Couple of Lights * I Opt for The Love In Bright * Twas A Pleasure Your Precious Hearts Visit * Very Nice Poe * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/3/2011 12:28:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, for your kind comment, it was nice to read your beautiful soul from your expressive poetry...
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:19:00 PM
drug addiction our affliction, fire burns intensively, better get another fiction, fix me better betterlee, sad stuff hey....Don
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Date: 10/1/2011 10:07:00 PM
How well can the dilemma be described? You skin the subject with clarity and purpose - in other words, a great verse.
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:37:00 PM
Awesome write lovely Lady Laura very vivid and descriptive...hoping this is just creative would be sad if you truly were addicted to drugs...sounds like you won the battle...with love....old Jack
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