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Sweet Secrets

Golden leaves adrift autumn wind blows soft kisses whispers sweet secrets

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 5:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Audrey. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 9:08:00 PM

Very nice image of the oncoming Fall and its soft winds blowing! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 5:00:00 PM

So gentle and sweet this one. Leaves ya a bit breathless!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/18/2010 8:09:00 PM

very beautiful senryu, Audrey :) each line was such a lovely testament to autumn... also like how you formatted it :) --nikko :)

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/18/2010 8:09:00 PM

Nice and light in it's tone.and it should edmbellish a picture, perhaps. It has the Reader's Digest or the old Saturday Evening Post aspect to it. I'll try again, Audrey, in any case, Best wishes to youand Jimmy and Godspeed. Gerard.

Amy Green

Date: 6/16/2010 10:00:00 PM

Dreamy, yeah- exactly. Beautiful. Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 8:52:00 PM

Congrats BBF on your success in my contest.. with this wonderful entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2010 3:04:00 PM

Although it's about Autumn, it's incredibly dreamy Audrey >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 6/14/2010 12:09:00 AM

Love the contrast in line 2/3 Audrey.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2010 12:50:00 AM

I love this, Audrey. So far I only saw autumn from you (other than myself) This is tough competition for me. haha. Excellent imagery. LUv, Andrea ps. thanks for doing my blog question. Stay posted for results of your choice!

John Rhinem

Date: 6/12/2010 8:13:00 PM

Smile! Wow, this is very soft and beautiful ~ A reflection of Your Precious Heart I believe....Smile, I just can't seem to shake Your splendors here today dear ~ Smile, You must be inspired--"Good!!" ~ Again, "Brushed Beautifully!!" ~ "My Love As Always," John! ~ Smile, "Bye Again!":) ~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2010 5:03:00 PM

That's my favorite season, too, Audrey. And I'm so delighted you are now enjoying the benefits of premium membership. A Soup Fairy is watching over you, dear. Love, Carolyn