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Sweet Rain

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Sweet Rain

Sweet rain drops tapping on the window panes
leaving trails on sills and ivy
in a rush like soft liquid, 
crystals fall, then vanish
‘neath the thirsty earth
and nourishes
the flowers;
earth worms

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 12:00:00 PM
    nicely penned Annalise....soup mail

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:48:00 AM
    Very nice write. No water is like rain water.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:20:00 AM
    Oooh I quite like this. And thought it was most clever how you described the rain droplets gliding across the glass and then eventually to the ground... it felt perfect considering how the nonet form dwindles down one syllable at at time. Vibrant images!

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 7:52:00 PM
    What a serene moment! Great job with the form as I found it somewhat difficult.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:30:00 PM
    beautiful nature, beautiful poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:54:00 AM
    Gorgeous write, I love it

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:23:00 PM
    I just love the title you picked, and the the rest of the poem fall like a lovely waterfall in our minds eye, thank you for this gem Annalise, love xxx

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Hi Annalise, just got your mail, and thanks,, Wow i have been missing some wonderful poetry, this is a gem,, love that form of poetry too.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Yes, nourishing elements for all life forms. Great write, Annalise! :)

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:21:00 PM
    My sis, my friend. I am so tardy in replying to my email, comments and messages. I have not forgotten my dear poetry sisters and my friends though. From time to time I do visit, but hoping to be here more often soon. Thanks for reading and for your encouraging words as always. I love this write of reminds me of back home in the country as a little girl, the rain drops were amazing on the giant trees we had around us especially the mango trees. loving this. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:44:00 PM
    this is sure a great poem on rain. It's just very eloquent, Annalise!!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:32:00 PM
    I really love this especially when you turn the wet earthy smelling leaves and see the fat worms wiggle down..they move so fast...I've been at this scene, very nice