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Sweet Quintain

Sweet Quintain, sing to me of poetry and skies of azure blue; of sea gulls flying free; of dawn and morning’s dew and sunshine as it falls with splendor on the sea. Sweet Quintain, give to me a tune. Let it be the song of birds on a gentle day in June. Let the melody have words of a poet’s serenade to the golden moon. Sweet Quintain, sing more serenades. Sing with the wind’s soft susurration. Be the breeze dancing through fields and glades. Never let there be cessation as water from mountains freshly cascades. Sweet Quintain, sing in light of day and serenade me too well past eventide. Sing even when a cloudburst comes my way, for beauties of nature everywhere reside. Be rain or be a hurricane, but let your music stay.

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Date: 8/3/2023 12:56:00 AM
Very sweet, congratulations
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Date: 8/1/2023 11:08:00 PM
A sweet serenade indeed ~ warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Andrea
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Date: 8/1/2023 7:04:00 PM
A beautiful descriptive write, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/31/2023 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea: A lovely flowing Song to nature. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 7/31/2023 2:24:00 PM
Loved it. Well deserved 1st place Andrea, congratulatioins.
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Date: 7/31/2023 2:22:00 PM
what a sweet Pome Andrea, many congrats on your top placement:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2023 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea! Your fun poem earned you "First Place" in my contest. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem rose above them to the top of the podium, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 7/27/2023 8:14:00 AM
Music in gentle rain or a hurricane - it can be very beautiful. Nice piece here, Andrea. (The like in should have mentioned to you by the way is the Dave Carrington prog, "Squaring the Circle". Yes, that's me at the top (ugly bugger, of course!) but in Dave's programme I do read that "Ballad of Reading Gaol" poem by Oscar Wilde. Slightly shorter version (about 18 minutes). If you can get to it, enjoy it. We're all fairly familiar with Oscar Wilde; I do rather like "Ballad".)
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Date: 7/26/2023 10:31:00 AM
I loved it, Nice poem.
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Date: 7/26/2023 5:41:00 AM
Much enjoyed the rhythm of your poem, Andrea. Wonderful poem from your gifted pen.
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Date: 7/26/2023 4:41:00 AM
Ahh!! Very descriptive lines comparing a quintain to beauty in nature. The expressive lines penned exudes with the feelings of the poet. Reads like a good contender for a contest to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
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Date: 7/26/2023 3:44:00 AM
Sweet indeed. Love this Andrea. I'm not much on form. Wish I was better at it but I do like the way this flows. Nice as usual. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/26/2023 3:41:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Hi. This is wonderfully written and executed. This entry defines poetry and poetic expressions in my eyes and mind. This is one of those entries that should be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Truly. It was a pleasure turning to your page. Keep enjoying poetry. Thank you for sharing your talent. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 7/26/2023 1:03:00 AM
You always amaze with the fluidity of your write. Everything flows so well. Thank for teaching me a new word...susurration. ;)
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Date: 7/25/2023 7:57:00 PM
Splendid and uplifting verse, Andrea! My kind of poetry - Bob H
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Date: 7/25/2023 7:25:00 PM
the science of the Quintain. You express it well with nature as you do here. Poetry can be work at times but when the muses go to work masterpieces are made.
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Date: 7/25/2023 6:26:00 PM
Nice flow to the poem.
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Date: 7/25/2023 5:53:00 PM
Personifying a poetry form, now that's a first! Brilliant song, Andrea:)
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Date: 7/25/2023 4:04:00 PM
beautiful penning, i loved the inspiration and the poetry of words
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