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Sweet Peace

Emotions get the best of me at times. I’ve felt betrayal’s bite; the pain runs circles in my mind and owns me. I’m too weak to fight. When into this unhealthy mix comes anger, I try mightily to stem the tide. I say, “Enough! Now of this torture, I’ll break free!” Then long-past sins that God forgave come taunting, robbing me of peace. It will not come when, on my own, I foolishly bid hauntings cease. Attempts are ineffectual. I can’t accomplish mind control. The more I try, the worse I get. I can’t fulfill the Father’s role! True peace is found in Him alone,* the kind that lasts. He’ll give me rest and peaceful sleep if I but ask, believing I’ll be truly blessed. *Psalm 4:8 “In peace I will lie down and sleep, for you alone, LORD, make me dwell in safety.” January 31, 2023 entered in the Finding Peace Poetry Contest placed 10th Sponsor: Regina McIntosh April 14, 2023 entered in the Brian Strand Premiere Contest 1208

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Date: 2/8/2023 10:33:00 AM
Janice, congratulations on your win. Ps. 4 and Ps. 121 are two of my favorites for our God "never slumbers, never sleeps." Beautifully expressed. A universal experience for all of us. Blessings of sweet slumber to you!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/16/2023 4:36:00 PM
Sam, BLESS you for this response. Janice
Date: 2/5/2023 4:11:00 AM
Beautiful writing. I love it. Congrats on the top win. God bless you with peace. Love, Gina
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/5/2023 7:08:00 PM
Gina, thanks a million for sponsoring and for my win. Janice
Date: 1/31/2023 1:06:00 PM
Yes, the peace that lasts is found in Christ alone!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/31/2023 4:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice

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