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Sweet Paramour

I see the edge of your smile and the tip of your varnished toe, the waterfall of your flaxen hair that makes your shadow grow: Love! I am the one, who loves you as the day. To lose you makes me shudder like a mast on a blustered day; Keel-haul and whip my hopeless love Send my soul to hell But let me call before I die, Love! I am the one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/1/2015 10:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend!A7
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Date: 7/30/2015 2:36:00 PM
Very romantic and dramatic, Peter! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:42:00 PM
Wonderful write, awesome descriptions
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Date: 7/30/2015 4:16:00 AM
beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/30/2015 3:47:00 AM
Peter, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/30/2015 3:03:00 AM
Peter, now that is sweet.... enjoyed reading this tonight... Congrats in Andrea's contest... LINDA
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on your sweet poem win! ~ lee
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:11:00 AM
This has a type of classic feel to it, Peter. I really liked the imagery of the waterfall of flaxen hair and the shuddering like a mast on a blustered day! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:09:00 AM
Wonderful write Peter! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:48:00 AM
Peter, I read the love and sincerity etched within the lines.. Love the imagery, just one line I hope to be to say a lil tweak: 6th line.. other than that, all lines is wow.. ~Olive ELoisa.. =')
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