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Sweet Pain

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Sweet Pain

Deep into my heart
A pain  so sweet and dulcet
Un traced but delicate

And over my eyes
A flow gentle in full glow
Marking Ah!my ail

And some folds of love
Like a virgin waiting for
The beloved's cozy arms.

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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 5:16:00 AM
    The subtle metaphorical twist is awesome finer in this poem i enjoyd readin. Pls do review mine too.