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Sweet Moment

One sweet moment of beauty taking its chance to pass on through colors of yellow and pink with some lovely shades of blue It may not be a garden of Eden and its moment fades fast Branding you forever with its beauty that couldent last Sometimes it brightly glows other times its a dim light But we always know its never seen at night They say if you follow it at the end theres a pot of gold So when you share a rainbow its all the riches you will hold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/7/2008 5:45:00 AM
It does seem almost miraculous to view. A spectacular sight, and indeed a very 'sweet moment'. Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/7/2008 4:31:00 AM
Colleen - Beautiful poem hon - so well said - The beauty of a rainbow is quite magical - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/7/2008 1:02:00 AM
So, "All of My Love To You Forever, Always, John!"~Bye Beautiful Lady!:)~Oh, and, "Happy Holidays To You, And All You Love!~Ps. Please, stop by and say hello unto me~it would mean so very much!!! Bye Dear:)
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Date: 12/7/2008 12:57:00 AM
"Beaitiful!"~Hello My Old/Young Dear Beautiful Friend, Colleen Laforme!"~It has been so long, since I have been honored to see your wonderous grace, upon these pages at poetry soup~And what a true joy it is to see you again now! This was such a pretty & colorful poem-I sincerely hope, a reflection of where your beautiful heart & soul is today dear lady!~And, I also, am hoping that it shall be only the beginning, of many more of your spendid writes to come!~cont~
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