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Sweet Melody

In my dreams You call to me With your sweet song And beautiful melody I hear you play your flute It resonates in me Playing a happy song I dance and tap my feet I follow your call I look among the trees You hide from me Still playing your melody Here and there I hear your laugh Teasing me… Challenging me… To follow the song To follow your sweet melody In a clearing I see you And you smile to me Finally we can dance We are together at last Until the sunrise We dance and tap our feet Following the beat Of your sweet melody Now I can see That destiny brought you to me We could find each other Through your sweet melody *** January 26, 2017

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White Wolf

Date: 1/27/2017 6:44:00 PM

Being a Celt myself, I thoroughly enjoyed the sweet mixture of both music and your wonderful words. I did notice the Celtic Cross in the bottom right corner of that lovely picture too. Well done, Claudia /|\

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/28/2017 4:42:00 AM

I stumbled upon this song and it called to me from the start. I always loved anything Celt related and when i listened to this song, i just had to write... I'm really happy that you liked :)

Oliver Muchuma

Date: 1/26/2017 9:33:00 PM

briliant write my dear

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/27/2017 7:17:00 AM

Thanks a Lot Oliver! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/26/2017 5:07:00 PM

the words and music go so beautifully together - brilliant work Claudia:-) hugs jan xx

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/26/2017 5:15:00 PM

Thank you Jan!!! I'm totally hooked by this song... It makes me want to dance while listening to it ;) Hugs back :*

Darren White

Date: 1/26/2017 11:38:00 AM

Wow. Excellent my friend <3 it works so well together :)

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/26/2017 12:29:00 PM

Yayyyy!!! Thank you my friend! I really like it <3

Sara Ella

Date: 1/25/2017 11:36:00 PM

The combination of your words to this music is perfect! Love this one <3 You paint a picture with your words Claudia.

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/26/2017 6:27:00 AM

Thank you Sara!!! I actually saw the story happening in my mind while writing... <3 - So happy I could make it justice :)

Tim Smith

Date: 1/25/2017 11:23:00 PM

Outstanding Claudia..It goes great with the music.

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/26/2017 6:25:00 AM

Yayyy... Thanks Tim! I fell in love by this song the moment I heard it... I was trying to write another poem... Had to stop and write this one as soon as this song started playing ;) - I'm happy you liked it...