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Sweet Lovely Gal

Sweet lovely gal, where do you live? Your match brings all his love to give, He restless combs all the little lanes Looking for your cute worry-stained face; He’s sworn his rib to ceaselessly trace For of all his high goals only this remains. Two rolling stones hardly coincide And two circling birds seldom collide; So stop your movement sweet lovely gal And let your roaming lover find his way To the chambers where you brood all day; And you will get your caring and loving pal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/11/2015 10:50:00 AM
How beautiful this poem reads. Your search for that lovely pal!!! Just flawless!!! 7
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 8/11/2015 1:10:00 PM
Thanks dear. I promise to look at your poems first thing tomorrow...I'll keep my promise dear. Love~Hannington.
Date: 7/10/2015 1:23:00 AM
Thank you for your review of my work. I enjoyed this poem. It is clever, tells the story beautifully and the rhyme is precise. Keep penning!
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Date: 6/26/2015 6:43:00 AM
I like "Two rolling stones hardly coincide And two circling birds seldom collide;" lovely write! I enjoyed
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Date: 6/26/2015 6:06:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece with lots of feeling ,my friend
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Date: 6/26/2015 5:53:00 AM
Good morning! Nice write! Thanks for sharing!
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