Sweet Love

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Unwrapping the Hershey's miniature semi-sweet dark chocolate longing for the delicate taste remembering how the last one tasted and then love like chocolate taste sweet sticks around and lingers upon the lips

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/6/2024 9:02:00 AM

Adorable. both picture and poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2024 1:43:00 PM

Why, thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/6/2024 6:05:00 AM

Awwn, this is such a cute poem and the picture is adorable.. Love the chocolaty descriptions throughout, so saccharine and mesmerizing.. "love like chocolate", "longing for the delicate taste" Mmm, now this made me crave for dark chocolates too, I love them!! A beautifully crafted poem, dear Sara.. As always, your words have so much warmth and serenity. Sending best wishes, light and poetic hugs :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2024 6:32:00 AM

Hiya, when my great granddaughter comes, she always wants chocolate (Hershey's) and ends up with chocolate cheeks and sticky fingers. LOL..Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/5/2024 9:50:00 AM

a sweet poem and a sweet picture. Liked 'love like chocolate." Nicely done, Sara K. Enjoyed it. Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2024 10:07:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sara B. Wasn't that a cute child. Sara K..When my great granddaughter comes, she loves her Hershey's miniatures and has to have some while at my house. Sara K