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Sweet Little Susan

Sweet little girl Susan, Returning from school, On her way back home, Found a little pup alone, Hitting car was gone, Injured in leg groaning ! Kind hearted Susan Brought him home Named him Bruzo, Took him to doctor, Wounds healed fast, Care best medicine ! Cattie her sweet cat, Made friends with Bruzo, Licked his tender face, Cooed and soothed, Bruzo was thrilled, Love was a sweet pill ! Guggu, the talkative parrot, Chirped from his cage, Susan was a little sage, Birds animals or mankind, To all she was equally kind, Her love was totally blind ! Dear child of her parents, Her pink chubby cheeks, A broad smile on her face, Could reduce grief to a trace, Her small world full of grace, Everyone she would embrace, One home and so much fun, Many toys but had no gun, Fairy appeared out of her book, Swayed magic wand, gave her a wish, Goodness in life never goes waste, Never ignore anyone in a haste! Written on 11/7/14 Contest- Children's fable Sponsor - Carol Easman Awarded 1st place

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Date: 7/18/2014 2:51:00 PM
Dr Upma, , Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:39:00 PM
Lovely story. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 7:22:00 AM
Thnx Joyce!
Date: 7/17/2014 6:06:00 PM
I love your fable Upma...congrats Tim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Tim !
Date: 7/17/2014 11:16:00 AM
Definitely not disappointed, I enjoyed it very much.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thnx Richard! My first ever fable,,
Date: 7/17/2014 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations, I'm glad I stopped by to read your winning poem.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/17/2014 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Appreciate ur visit ,, trust I didn't disappoint u //Upma//
Date: 7/16/2014 8:39:00 AM
Fine job, well done! Congratulations!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 9:08:00 AM
Oh so glad to hv ur visit! Thnx Roy!
Date: 7/16/2014 5:18:00 AM
the stuff of which tales are made.. love the happy ending, dr urma.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 9:05:00 AM
Thnx a lot Nette for ur visit n lovely wishes!
Date: 7/15/2014 7:54:00 PM
wonderful sentiment and a well deserved winner:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 12:08:00 AM
Thnx Jan!
Date: 7/15/2014 4:31:00 PM
Love your children's fable , Upma. I did not even notice this contest before. It is good sometimes to write about things like these, helps to lighten the mind. I have written numerous poems for children, but they are nearly all in Maltese. Congrats on your top placing. // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 9:07:00 AM
Glad ur story wax published,, cud u pls send ? That wud be awesome if u get it translated,, so as to hv many readers,, who wud surely gain! Our pleasure!
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/16/2014 4:29:00 AM
One day, when I find time, I intend to translate all my Maltese work into English, including a story called 'Marina' (already published). // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 12:08:00 AM
Thanks for ur kind visit and lovely comments as always Paul // Upma//
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 12:06:00 AM
My first ever such poem,, didn't really know how to ho about , but it just occured ,, glad to know u hv written many for children,, I love kids ,, want to read some of urs,, can't these be translated to eng ??
Date: 7/15/2014 11:57:00 AM
A beautiful fable. Congrats on the win in my contest. I'm glad you entered it!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/15/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Carol ! Entered just in time ,, it was real fun ,, glad on my place !

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