Sweet Kisses

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. McDonald's breakfast... .... sirupy kisses.

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Bl Devnath

Date: 1/23/2012 8:30:00 AM

Cute write with sweet words, enjoyed, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2012 7:41:00 AM

Sweet smack Sara, cute..very cute...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2012 4:53:00 PM

awww, this is COOL, sugary fun at McDonald's and NO, I did not really speak 80's speak. hahaha. but I had a lot of fun researching it and I actually remembered hearing most of those phrases.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/21/2012 2:41:00 PM

LOL, yes, they would be sweet kisses : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2012 11:39:00 AM

Sausage Egg McMuffin, now that's the best McDonalds has to offer! Great write my friend! Awesome Work!!