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Sweet Jane

Sweet Jane, The essense of euphoria, cloud of confusion Fooled by your seductions, indulge in delusion You betray me, Trading blissful thoughts you gave me, for Will My best friend I knew forever, and still Eyes Bloodstained in pain, and raging until Sweet Mary, You carried me away from fury, from Ill, in the moment, Take Me To the time I spent with you, dimes I spent on you, In anguish, when the pollute clears, I can see and hear, but only to know, the time I've wasted years we've embraced, Monopolized my night and day for your own snakish intentions.. What Trickery.. Though, instead of resistence and bickering, I kiss your wet lips, as you dry mine The Stress lifts, Self-realization hits, the cause of anxiety, and mass ambition The Irony, Our relationship seems to be teeming/teaming with irony You Stand for rebellion, but you enslaved me Through, at first through lustful gazing, Set akindle blushes to your face, and to my amazement, Through pre-adolescent stages, and justifications, Became an arranging of a forbidden engagement, Between a boy and lady, Manipulative of love and time.. A Boy's mind.. ..One last time... I Say, After I set Astray, To count the days, before I greet, Mary Jane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/5/2016 2:59:00 AM
DEVIN...;) SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2016 10:54:00 AM
nice to read this one again Devin... linda
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Date: 11/28/2013 7:29:00 PM
Hum, this reminds me of my old sweeten days. The way love snuck up on me with a young heart. All I have to say it was not meant to be. Awesome first poem... Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2013 4:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, everyone. I am glad to be apart of such a welcoming community. As of the poem, it elaborates a difficult time in my life. It has many themes, as it may incorporate many metaphors...or may not, I just wanted to say, because most do not catch it.
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Date: 11/27/2013 11:38:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Devin, You rocked me with your first poem, . Enjoy your stay with us as a family
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Date: 11/27/2013 8:53:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup,very beautifully written.
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Date: 11/27/2013 3:05:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Devin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:08:00 PM
I love it all for a first poem, Devin , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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