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Sweet Insanity, Painful Agony

I watched him walk away, I had nothing to say. Why should I? It was goodbye. I woke up and found him, A face I have never seen. NO memory whatsoever NO memory forever. Who is he? WHo could he be? A face unknown Shake my bones I am scared I never dared. The fire within me ignite I gave up without a fight. Laughs echoing the walls, Hearing mad calls.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 9:04:00 AM

NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN

Skat A

Date: 1/7/2016 5:48:00 PM

Will, enjoyed this poem again, well expressed. SKAT

Teresa Godwin

Date: 4/2/2014 10:02:00 PM

Piercing emotions. Get it out, great read. Welcome to Soup, it's an awesome place to rest in what ever way you soul needs to release. Write on. ~Teresa

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2014 8:00:00 PM

love rhyme i enjoyed reading your first work. happy writing and reading. Jan x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2014 4:12:00 PM

Will, love the flow and rhyme, better yet the adrenaline meaning of this poem. Awesome and deep. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Michael Alexander

Date: 2/16/2014 12:42:00 PM

this poem wraps you into a conflict, very strong. Here's to a warm welcome to the soup, I'm new as well and already feel a part of the community. Keep writing, as I am sure, I as well as others, will thoroughly enjoy. Thank you for sharing. - Mike.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2014 8:47:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Will- I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/16/2014 7:32:00 AM

Will, the madness of it all. How easy it is to give into the call, Will,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Deb Wilson

Date: 2/15/2014 11:45:00 PM

scary situation for sure! liked your poem..luv,Deb