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Sweet Hunger

The desire wells up inside me and I feel near to bursting my needs so close to the surface churning with passion this sweet hunger is all consuming as I devour the fragrence of your flesh the heady saltiness of lust stinging my tongue I am the fire, you are the oxygen that fuels the flame forever burning on a hot bed of embers that will never die from hunger Oh, the sweet hunger that drives the passion between two souls I am drunk on your wines.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/3/2008 4:55:00 AM
well written :)
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Date: 9/29/2008 6:04:00 AM
aweee that was so fine Trudy. The line "you are the oxygen that fuels my flame" really took me. You are the pen which makes me draw surfaces o'er my heart:) Love Chitra
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Date: 9/28/2008 8:42:00 PM
Another title suggestion: CONSUMED. I think that's an apt description for you. hehehe! So raw and innocent at the same time, dang!!!!
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