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Sweet Fruits

Now Ms Dietrich, I have to give a response, To your poem on behalf of fruit lovers, thus; Of fruits we will disagree I love then for breakfast, even for tea. I love my apples, peaches and pear Watermelons, coconuts, and guavas No fear! I eat a cherry, then a plum And suck on star apples until the milk is done. Even when they are stuck in my throat Moving north, but heading south. Love them. Tangerines, Mandarins and artiniques, From the same genus,but all unique Oh and the grapes which are fed While lying on my feathered bed Can I tell you about the cucumber Chew it. bend it, then devour Now my favourite is the avocado Refreshes vigour, and strengthens ardour Now there are some exotic ones you see News headlines to you but old story to me My voyages have been long time made Within each log, I write a page On the last line an anecdote To the humble gage, and artichoke But if ever I have a regret It's of the fruits not tasted yet.

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Date: 12/22/2012 6:05:00 PM
oh hahahaha. can't believe someone got inspired to do a rebuttal poem about my fruit sonnet. this is Splendid!! I can see you really like your fruit. The other day my sister sent me a damn fruit basket for Xmas. wish I could have given you the pears in it. I loved the nuts, the popcorn, the chocolates. But the five pears, well, I tried to eat two of them. They made me choke and were not even nice and sweet. but wow, the chocolates in that basket were amazing with their fake fruit centers!!
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Date: 12/22/2012 6:05:00 PM
By the way, are you blood type A? It would explain a lot !!!
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Date: 12/22/2012 6:30:00 PM
Thats something to find out, next time I visit my GP, hope you can say why? curious, thanks for the inspiration.
Date: 12/22/2012 2:11:00 PM
.nice write Robert...
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Date: 12/22/2012 6:37:00 PM
Thanks again Joseph for your kind comments.

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