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Sweet Flower

Oh my sweet flower living in such a wasteland yet so strong and true waving in the wind with graceful arms and your petals, petals so beautiful they bring tears to the eyes. when you bloom you shine the darkness away leaving the world better. Your sweet fragrance creates memories which will never be forgotten. Oh my sweet flower stay with me forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/17/2015 9:14:00 AM
Good one.have a great day:)
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Date: 11/15/2015 6:18:00 PM
Hi Jordan, this is such an excellent piece that I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/8/2015 12:55:00 PM
Jordan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/7/2015 5:45:00 PM
Jordan Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Jordan Smith
Date: 11/7/2015 6:58:00 PM
welcoming me here.
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Jordan Smith
Date: 11/7/2015 6:57:00 PM
Thank you for welcoming here.
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Date: 11/7/2015 5:46:00 PM
PS. i enjoyed the beautiful scent and imagery. SK

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