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Sweet Dreams Part 2

Tell me I'm dreaming I've been waiting all day I know works important But I need to get away I follow his footsteps Along that bright stream When all of a sudden There was a scream I plunge into the thicket Not knowing what's ahead I shortly spotted A spider and her thread "I'll weave you a hammock you look very tired, dear." "If I lay to rest," I said, "I'll be dead soon I fear." I ask her who screamed She pointed to the north I bowed and said thank you And then I bursted forth This scream was different Not something too weird Maybe I'm too late Something else I feared I came to a mountain A mountain made of clouds I climbed up a little bit and I met women in shrouds They dropped bones on rocks They quietly did chant "Tell me, young boy Would you try this plant?" I inhaled the vapors They stung my lungs All of the witches giggled And stuck out their tongues I wandered around them In a confusing haze Suddenly I felt Penetrated by a gaze One witch did stare at me Never looking away I went to speak to her but All faded to grey I fell from my dream The sun fell on my face I'll head back another time To that enchanted place -kp-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/4/2008 3:14:00 PM
nothing really...i'm just talking to alexz and writing a new story. what kind of guitar do you play? i like acustic myself
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:44:00 PM
What? Did I offend you or somethin. . . Dammit I always do somethin wrong. . . . .
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:35:00 PM
Cause he is waiting for the right person. . . And anyway I don't even think he really likes me that way no matter wat happens. . . :(
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:29:00 PM
Cause I like this "GUY" and he knows I have feelings for him BUT, he doesn't want a relationship right now. . . Which I respect that. . Really I do But. . . . My feelings are gettin in the way and are makin me do stupid things like tryin to kill myself. . . SOOOOO SAD!!! :....((
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:24:00 PM
I know, I know.... I'm getting my own laptop for either my b-day or christmas. . . I'm SAD :..(((
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Date: 10/17/2008 4:21:00 PM
When you get on look up Razors Are For Shaving
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Date: 10/17/2008 3:14:00 PM
Well bye. . . You should go on to and look up Sam Is Broken Beyond Repair. . .
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Date: 10/17/2008 3:08:00 PM
I'm embarrassed to say this but here it goes......... I actually thought bout.... you all day. . . Now I feel like such an idoit (or how ever you spell it)... What chu doin and thinkin bout right this moment?? If you don't mind me askin...
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