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Sweet Dreams Part 1

Cold nights in darkness In darkness I lay Tossing and turning Waiting for the day My mind is sleepless Never stopping to rest My mind won't have sleep As a regular guest I walked in bright forests On an old beaten trail When out of nowhere Out walked a snail "Well, good day sir. My name is Chance." I must be sleeping Or in some sweet trance Me and this snail walked Down that old beaten trail When we stumbled upon A quiet green vale With no path down No path to descend Mr. Chance left me He was no good friend I climbed down great rocks Small ledges and crags When out of thin air Appeared a man in rags "Hello dear boy, quite a climb, is it not?" Am I dreaming? Or maybe I'm shot This old man was odd Not a normal old man He was quite muscular With a dark olive tan His name was Grandpa Not a grandpa of mine He told me I'd make it And that I'd do fine I must be wigging Or at least I am ill Or maybe, just maybe I took a great spill This dream is too great For it to be real I think I like it I hope I don't heal So where was I? Talking to the old man When I reached the bottom He giggled and ran I followed his footsteps Along a cool bright stream When suddenly I was Ejected from my dream Morning has come Too early I'd say I'd like to dream more But my dream cannot stay -kp-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 9:26:00 PM
Kyle, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Kyle. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2008 1:15:00 PM
This was very thoughtful, introspective. Well done, and worthy to be among the featured poems this week. Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/10/2008 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations Kyle on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Dreams carry many important messages, I believe possibly from angels watching over us. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/10/2008 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:13:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/17/2008 2:49:00 PM
At least YOU care if I die or not..... I saw your pic on you're the one with the drink in your hand right?? Cause if you are you're smexy...... And YES I said smexy instead of y (I know I'm weird) Have you seen my pi yet his last name is Gray..... OH YEA!!!! Thank You for makin me feel happy for the first time today.... ;)))
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Date: 10/17/2008 1:18:00 PM
Should I kill myself??
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Date: 10/17/2008 11:49:00 AM
Hey tell me the truth am I annoyin you at all??
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Date: 10/17/2008 10:13:00 AM
GOD!!!!!!!!!!! I my life so bad right now that it's not even funny..... So, my friend is smokin you know what and he's also my Ex-Boyfriend.... And I'm SOOOOO depressed I don't know why I just want to curl up in a ball and just D I E!!!! AHHHHHHH!!! :(((((((((
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Date: 10/17/2008 8:26:00 AM
No, cause that makes me feel bad now... Go do what you have to do...
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:54:00 AM
Hey, Sooo, My mom s gone all day today and I'm soooooooo freakin bored.... If you can talk then maybe I won't be so bored anymore......
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Date: 10/17/2008 4:05:00 AM
Have you ever seen the show TrueBlood??
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:33:00 PM
His last name is Gray
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:32:00 PM
Well, night love ya' ;))
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:30:00 PM
YES!!!! He does live in missouri
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:29:00 PM
Or look up Sam Broken Beyond Repair
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:26:00 PM
First go on to m y s p a c e then look up Day-V And At the end of Day-V add an XD
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:21:00 PM
cant get to a myspace called www.myspace.com/day-v it wont let you. Sooo...I dunno what to do? lol
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:20:00 PM
Now that makes me want to meet you all the more....... So did you see my picture yet?
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:14:00 PM
I think west chester... In south lebanon is where I live
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:13:00 PM
I live in west chester,Ohio
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:10:00 PM
Now I'm all shky and nervous.. I can't help wat I feel though you know wat I mean? And yes you are a really likeable guy.. And for some strange reason I feel safer when I'm talkin to you..
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:04:00 PM
Cause it's kinda .......................... you....... Sorry...........
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:01:00 PM
No it's kinda someone else........ I'm kinda scared to tell you....... But I will any ways cause I know that you wouldn't get upset at me..... Would you??
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