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Sweet Dreams and Demons

Lovely landscape is this as I drift along Swans are floating,happy birds singing their song Painting my way with the colors of the wind Forgetting how I could have failed or might have sinned Reaching out to grasp the warmth and bring it close Fill my head with shooting stars and bright rainbows When suddenly the climate changes drastically My mind's awhirl with things I do not want to see I can't wake up,I cannot breathe,I dare not scream As silently I plead"please give me back my dream!" I'm drenched in fear and crowned with animosity For the ruination of my simple reverie I'll be chased down but I'll not give up easily My dream angel will guide my rest again you see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/26/2011 10:44:00 PM
Cute entry in soup's big contest.Congrats on still being in the running!
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Deb. Love Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:08:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv.. good luck...
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Date: 7/15/2010 10:46:00 AM
Was truly a pleasure to be able to read your poetry today Deb. I hope you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:57:00 AM
A nice enjoyment and deep poem, a fight between angels and demon. Of course sweet dreams will power them out. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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