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Sweet Dreams

Sweet Dreams At night when nearing seven she creeps out of her room carrying gold magic dust in a special silver spoon Across the dark sky with great might she flies sprinkling some dust on each house she spies To each good child some dust is given and off to sleep they all are driven Sweet dreams always they all would get for their chores and homework they never forget To each of them good nights she bid and every night this she did No one knows where she lives for not one clue she ever gives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/29/2009 3:11:00 PM
This is trully sweet, I enjoy your writting style, and the way you capture the reader till the very end... Very nice... Bonnie
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Date: 1/26/2009 10:04:00 AM
this is really pretty. it seems like something you would read to a child.. very pretty Maryam. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 1/25/2009 1:14:00 PM
nice one!!!. . .i really like it =) *Breana
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Date: 1/21/2009 8:08:00 PM
This is like a lovely little fairytale. Such a beautiful write, Maryam. I love the perfect title! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/20/2009 6:26:00 PM
Awww! I like it! Good word choice "on each house she spies" Keep it up! Love Always ~Jen~
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