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Sweet Dreaming Vision

Through mind’s corridor Arcane surreal image Flashes in heart’s screen sonorous music non stop murmurous song on crazy with her thought gorgeous secret face dazzling clear in his heart's night sweet dreaming vision Written on: 25th April,2016 For contest: Sponsored by: Mystic Rose

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Sandra Haight

Date: 4/25/2016 3:30:00 PM

Such lovely Senryus, BL. And, you used all those required words so nicely in such a short poem. Well done, and best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/25/2016 3:32:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment with best of luck. Loved always, bl

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 4/24/2016 3:44:00 PM

BL, This form I am just starting to learn and try and this is a very good example to me to emulate! Nice write Sir!

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/24/2016 8:53:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. It's very easy, just art is needed to do it. Loved always, bl