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Sweet Butterfly

Delicate as finest gossamer yet She dances a lovely pirouette, Riding sunbeams as she goes Resplendent in her finest clothes, A fluttering jewel before my eye How beautiful you are, sweet butterfly. Entry for Writing Challenge, October - Butterfly- Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode 1/10/2019. Placed 3rd.

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Funom Makama
Date: 10/15/2019 11:03:00 AM
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A big big big big congratulations on your win my wonderful frirend... Lines so magnetic, words so beautiful, I am gradually becoming an extremist to your thoughts.. Great piece here.
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/15/2019 11:11:00 AM
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Thank you Funom. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2019 7:31:00 PM
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Gary congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love your image too!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/9/2019 5:53:00 AM
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Thank you Dear heart. :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2019 4:27:00 PM
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Beautifully written Gary, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/6/2019 4:30:00 PM
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Thank you Jan. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/6/2019 11:47:00 AM
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- Lovely described, Gary ... congratulations on a great win in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/6/2019 11:47:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/2/2019 6:29:00 AM
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Very nicely done, Gary. Beautiful write!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/2/2019 6:49:00 AM
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Thank you Joe. :)
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/1/2019 9:53:00 PM
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Gary you are the butterfly poet! The cadence is liltingly butterfly-ish. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/2/2019 4:45:00 AM
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Thank you P.S. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2019 9:40:00 AM
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Lovely, Gary. So sweet.
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/1/2019 9:40:00 AM
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Thank you Line. :)

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