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Sweet Blue Rain

One day, if I could open my eyes and watch you walkthrough the sweet blue rain, and wash those tears away. If I could open my eyes, and watch you wear the same cotton blue jeans with that cute white blouse, and tell those clouds to splash sweet blue rain, into your heart The fresh scent of sweet blue rain bring April showers, and flowers sell in the marketplace. Well, a funny thing happened this Sunday, on our walk-through of Palomino Park. I noticed some things that you do with your sweet blue smile. Loving you may take some time. Let’s take a walk again and fill an empty heart, with sweet blue rain.

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Date: 1/24/2009 7:06:00 AM
Hi Gregory, Congratulations on your feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 1/22/2009 12:52:00 PM
Congrats Gregory on "Sweet Blue Rain" being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:31:00 AM
Gregory - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/20/2009 5:00:00 PM
Nice use of color and imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/19/2009 5:33:00 PM
What a lovely poem, so loving and well deserved to be featured this week! Well done!~ Carrie
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Date: 1/19/2009 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I know you will have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/4/2008 5:49:00 PM
I love your poems - seems we are on the same wave lengh.. Keep up the good work!
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