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Sweet Baby Girl

Walking unto the pier's edge gazing into her sea.... Stirring waters within my Spirit these crashing waves Transcending, this finite flesh the world her sky as time If you believe they say then, it can be ? And, I do Believe.

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/13/2013 4:35:00 PM

A sweet and charming write. Full of feeling and emotion. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Love Germs poem

Cindy Lu

Date: 8/5/2013 1:39:00 PM

what a pretty poem. Seems as though you are very fond, and hopeful in this beatiful verse here. Not around alot, take care and God bless, Lucinda

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/4/2013 3:29:00 PM

Wonderful poem on attraction to the beauty. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/4/2013 6:17:00 AM

I believe!!!! One<3. Ty4sharing ~ cherie

Jiril Clemons

Date: 7/3/2013 3:33:00 PM

Direct explanation of Beauty. Nicely Put, Johnny. I enjoyed it. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out some of my poems, might find one you like. Peace.

Debbie Knapp

Date: 7/1/2013 6:03:00 PM

The sea with so many secrets and yet so magical anything is possible my friend. Yes, I do believe and hope you do too...