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Sweet and Salty

Sweet and salty Or Should I say Salty and sweet Never needed tenderizer To soften this meat Devouring Carmen Down by the sea Always a place I wanted to be That's it Richard Ferry PS .. Sorry I did not follow the rules

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 1:06:00 AM

well, you could have followed the rules and I'd have placed it, you silly!!! I did like it , my friend, but rules is rules. heehee

Richard Ferry
Date: 11/9/2013 10:50:00 PM

As Anne Lise says in her comment...Rules were meant to be broken...Don`t you ever break the rules? Have a good weekend yourself Andrea At least you find my interesting...Hate to be one of the norm.....Rick..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2013 5:19:00 PM

.... some rules are to be broken :))) - Well done .... anyway Richard! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/19/2013 8:03:00 PM

Thanks Anne....I follow your writes always. Sorry I don`t comment very much..Your work is leaps and bounds above most..Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2013 10:24:00 PM

i like this... Good luck in the contest...Linda

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/15/2013 10:52:00 PM

Glad you like