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Sweet & Sour Para

It was Alvin the croc's special day,
to the lake all his friends led the way.
They said “Come, make it snappy
‘cause to make your day happy
we’ve ordered your fave take-away”

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  1. Date: 7/23/2010 1:57:00 AM
    haven't been able to congratulate you on this-- yay for your win with this Sharon! hope you're having a good day :) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 4:11:00 PM
    I like this. line three has a laugh aloud crack to it. I like limericks myself as they seem to bring out everyone's best humor. Regards, Gerard

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 7:46:00 PM
    Oh, a birthday poem. HOw sweet, Sharon. haha. Congrats on your clever limerick. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 7:09:00 AM
    Congrats on the 7th place win.

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 9:44:00 PM
    Congratulations Sharon on your num siete. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 1:30:00 PM
    Witty poetry Sharon, and I love the title. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 10:46:00 AM
    Congratulations Sharon on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "To Die For"Limericks. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 4:48:00 AM
    Enjoyed this party on the beach. Congratulations on your win! There were many wonderfully witty entries. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 12:36:00 PM
    This was really good Sharon.. thankxxx for your comments on my Acrostic and I must tell u ..that u are the 4th person to tell me they like that love line.. hope its enough to make it a winner..with luv..thankxxx.

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 10:29:00 AM
    cute and witty!!

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 8:48:00 AM
    Hahaha, Sharon! Lovely written Limerick! I only wonder what kind of take-away it was!!! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your friendly comments...:) Gert

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 11:10:00 PM
    oh my goodness, haha poor sweet and sour take-out!! That must've been one lip-smackin' meal though, lucky Alvin the croc! Wish you the best in the contest, Sharon :) thanks so much as well, glad that my poem made you smile ^_^ --I hope your week is better!!-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 7:41:00 PM
    A nice entry in the contest. Good luck

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 6:50:00 PM
    And Alvin the Croc got a wonderful meal- The end, lol! Wonderful write Sharon-Good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 6:12:00 PM
    Ha!! A good one, Sharon!!! A different point of food for sure!! :)