Sweet Passion

My love,he's an anchor in this sea of strife.
He's many-splendored and enriches my life.

With soul changing clarity I see his heart.
I yearn for the fire of his touch when we part.

Passion grows quickly in the garden of night.
Our love transforms in the sweet morning light.

That's when I know that I'm heaven-bound.
Devotion so pure that it makes not a sound.

He brings everything I imagined always.
Excites me at night and then flood lights my days.

Beyond earthly realm is this rapture I feel.
Desire immeasurable,love that's so real.



for "Valentine' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 6/12/2013 5:10:00 PM
Deb, congrats on your win with this passionate love poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/10/2013 1:54:00 PM
........your poem is very sweet........... congrats!!! SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:44:00 AM
Hello Deb,, Congratulations with your sweet Valentines poem *luv~PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win on this very lovely Valentines poem my dear Deb! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/11/2013 4:13:00 AM
Deb, beautifully written with the passion of true love. Congratulations on your Valentine win!
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:28:00 PM
Deb congrats :-) SandyIvy
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Date: 2/1/2013 3:56:00 AM
A scintillating, enrapturing love poem. The flow and rhythm are silky and smooth.
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Date: 2/1/2013 3:45:00 AM
soo very beautiful..Charma
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Date: 1/31/2013 10:13:00 PM
What are we still doing awake? LOL. Hiya poet! Love this entry! My fave lines are the last two, just sublime. Sweet as all get out... thanks for the comments on my entry for Su's contest. :) Have a good weekend ... if you share this with your guy, I think you should... lol... hugs, Cyndi
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