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Sweep Soft Snowflakes

She said: ‘Sweep soft snowflakes this sunny Sunday - Synthetic sleet, you see, from Slava’s Snow Show!’ My wife and mother managed to read it slowly. (About my day at work for Gwendolen's contest)

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2011 9:48:00 AM

by the way....did you see the picture on poetry soup?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 11:28:00 AM

thankxx Jack for all your sweet and kind comments luv.. hoping u and Sue have a fantastic weekend luv.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/6/2011 4:49:00 PM

Gwendolen's contest sure is giving our tongues a workout haha :) enjoyed this one as well Jack-- and congrats on all your wins :) I wish you the best in the contest :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2011 4:22:00 PM

short but with some good tongue twisting, jack. I like it!!

Judy Ball

Date: 10/6/2011 4:01:00 PM

A really cute little tongue twister my friend. It really made me smile. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2011 7:07:00 PM

Great Alliteration that reads like a winner to me..Wonderful way of sharing your work experiences in a tongue twister..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for taking time to review my work.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2011 11:50:00 AM

wow Jack this is a great Alliteration tongue twister luv.. good luck in the contest.. I entered an old one Do Doggie Do ... which won in another contest last year .so hope Gwen likes it too..luv..