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Countrymen take stand Hard to broom from where they land Gritty like course sand By Robb A. Kopp All Rights Reserved © MMX

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Date: 5/6/2010 8:48:00 AM
Cool Senryu Robb and strong first line ... enjoyed reading your creative write today... luv. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:56:00 AM
Can't help but think of "Braveheart" with this one, Robb. No one made a stronger stand than Wallace. Excellent senryu! My mom died January 24, 1984. When I referred to "this time of year," I was talking about the approach of Mothers Day. Love, Carolyn
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