Get Your Premium Membership

Sweating It

He spun the wheel, no big deal there; no real money. In a short while. that big smile of poor Lyle vanished. He pursed his lips, Gripped his chips and Took nips of gin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/24/2011 4:16:00 AM
I like this one quite a bit. Ole' Lyle! Thank you for reading my stuff. ~JSLambert Happy Easter!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/9/2011 8:08:00 PM
really liked this one a nice read. thank you for reading redwinged black bird and for your comment. yes it is one of 49 nature poems that i wrote at Lowell Ponds which is a wild life park about 6 blocks from where i live.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/6/2011 5:49:00 AM
Err, no I am being blamed :( poor me and poor Lyle, see there I found another one I liked :) you make this form look so easy btw :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/10/2011 12:14:00 AM
the poor guy (and stupid guy too) haha
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2011 5:08:00 PM
LOL I must research this form, YOu are so sophisticated, international, dreamy! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 3/2/2011 7:52:00 AM
Hi Robert! "chips 'n gin don't sound so good together. I'm pulling your leg. This is a scene that some might see at a gambling house. Written with wit and insight. Best to you, Mikki
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2011 2:25:00 AM
Hey Robert enjoyed this witty write of yours, quite an interesting form as well :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/22/2011 6:07:00 PM
I wrote one today on Than-baek. will in a day or two.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/22/2011 5:56:00 AM
This goes to my favourite, Robert. I shall let you know as I write in this form.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/22/2011 5:51:00 AM
very witty and humorous write. This is a new form I have come across, will into it. Robert
Login to Reply
Date: 2/22/2011 12:42:00 AM
there is a lot in this wonderful poem, Robert, just love it. Harry
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things