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Sweat From the Young

This once soft hands sows the seed in soil and sun on farm fields we deed, lads like me sweat hard and we are a creed each has a story that makes heart bleed. away from study and play we work to feed poverty stricken my toil is a dire need, when all our deed yields to succeed it fills the coffers of my landlord’s greed. Is there a pesticide to kill the poverty weed a spray to root out the lack till we are freed, this once soft hands and heart makes this plead. 9-April-2016 Contest: Images that make you think Picture - 1 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 4/27/2016 9:46:00 PM
Sathya, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/15/2016 6:19:00 PM
Nice to see what you came up with. Congrats in this contest.
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Date: 4/14/2016 9:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sathya:)
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Date: 4/9/2016 1:01:00 PM
Very emotive work..I can feel the pain in the lines..As I look down at my very damaged hands, I think these are not damaged compared to others in other countries who have to work so hard for so little..Thanks for dropping by my page with congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thanks for your comments. Agree, Child labor is a very big issue es.p in places where the poverty is acute.

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