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The summer moon was swollen, blue A flaw that girl knew thru-and-thru And taking that light's charm in hand She made our bed the dunes of sand With but one gaze her sparkling eyes The loves I'd known met their demise My heart, her gold doubloon to toss Atoned on moonbeam's pearly cross Though drifting on that sea of dunes Our rafts tossed with romantic runes Fierce conflagration seared our cores One bonfire, crooned by ocean roars From first we touched in moonlit skin Our urges merged with summer's sin A carefree dance of limbs and laughs Without the shame for better halves "Oh, murder me" I sighed in passion "Destroy me sweet, in fleshly fashion" For all I'd valued, pride and purpose Lost then, as our sins usurped us The place that wickedness thus stirs My mouth and marrow met with hers The swirling seas of "us" grew wider Frayed, I strayed so deep inside her Warm and wild and wondrous, down To depths where lovers gladly drown Her sinews' flood was mine to taste That dermal landscape laid to waste Our battle waged with bloodless bliss A windswept war wrought from a kiss No quarter giv'n that moonlight's ire We vanquished each last drunk desire With senses spent and cravings calm We soothed in Neptune's briny balm The mad old moon a-dancing bright Our cool swim daubed in tender light Oh, such tender light ... It all seems now a sweetened dream Two lifes ago and years downstream Yet, what we found there on the sand Far more than dreams ... and thrice as grand. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Completely New (8) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 8/12/2020 7:15:00 AM
Tip of the very uppermost top. Shining bright exciting poetry.
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Date: 8/7/2020 9:25:00 PM
Greg, this was a powerful on the edge piece. Very nicely communicated and displayed in a tasteful manner. Sinful, playful and romantic. Enjoyed very much. Best Wishes, jess
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Date: 7/22/2020 5:17:00 PM
Wow Greg, this is super sensuous and with imagery to die for! I loved every line. Congratulations on your worthy win of First Place! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/15/2020 8:12:00 PM
Love it, Greg! A beautiful, romantic poem of forbidden love. Every time I read a poem of yours, I am more amazed by your story telling and talent to rhyme seamlessly. FAVE!
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Date: 7/14/2020 6:47:00 PM
Another gem born from romantic moonlight, my friend. Vivid imagery and shimmering poetic expression in the romance and passion of a summer night! It is wonderful! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 7/13/2020 10:18:00 PM
This is one of your best Greg, congrats on another contest win, I have to fave this one!!
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Date: 7/13/2020 9:18:00 PM
Greg, another deserving #1. I left a comment at your fb page. Well done!
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Date: 7/12/2020 11:02:00 AM
Hey Gregory. You always weave such a grand tale. As usual, I was captured by the conquest of your words, your rhymes, and your subtle but sumptuous wit. If I could leave this orb in style, it would be in one of your poems. Take care, my friend, and God bless!
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Date: 7/12/2020 10:45:00 AM
A HUGE congrats, Gregory--such a skillfully written, vividly descriptive story of lust and guilt. Janice
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Date: 7/12/2020 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/poem. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day................
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Date: 7/10/2020 6:52:00 PM
wow, Greg!! What a stunner. You were born to poetry like duck to water. FAVE
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Date: 7/10/2020 12:38:00 PM
Yet another master stroke, Greg. I trust there are no lingering sand chafes :) I see from your reply below you'll be focusing on your music. Best to you with all you do and hope to see you around here from time to time. I always look forward to reading your stuff and am grateful for the encouragement you have given me.
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Date: 7/10/2020 5:35:00 AM
Absolutely stunning poetry my friend. Clearly on par with the great golden masters of old! A true joy to read and soak in the magical cadence , imagery and hot sensual love exhibited in this wondrous gem. A fav ... God bless...
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Date: 7/10/2020 4:10:00 AM
Oh, I absolutely love this! A spectacular write, Greg:) I'm glad you've decided to stick around, bud.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/10/2020 8:59:00 AM
Yeah, Greg, I'm on Facebook but I haven't been there in a while. I'll stay in touch, for sure. Best of luck with the music! Work on publishing a poetry book while you're at it, my poet brother:-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, my friend ... I'll only be posting a poem here-and-there, and maybe entering a contest if a poem fits, but I won't be around much, or writing FOR contests anymore, as I have to get back to music full-time. I hope you'll always stay in touch though, Edward. Are you on Facebook?

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