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There was a time when I was you In every fold of delusion and disparity In every expedition of fancy and folly In every shred and thread of ecstasy On the stand of living a liberal, regret-free life Now, there is this time when I'm still you But with a growing curiosity to know how I was By re-visiting the mirror of past in you Through the corridors of intimacy in the maze of time As the colors didn't disappear in air But were adopted, then owned by you As if two chameleons did a permanent swap When reflection of forgotten days finally got fully retrieve, Depicted a *****, sacrificial way of love: In the pursuit of passion and empathy While I was filled with fragrances and flowers, Someone was simply left with several lots of pricking thorns

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Date: 5/18/2016 12:39:00 AM
Shameen, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Shameen Imran
Date: 5/19/2016 2:50:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 5/16/2016 9:35:00 PM
Shameen Imran Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shameen Imran
Date: 5/19/2016 2:56:00 AM
Hi...SKAT! Thank you very much for welcoming me here and I'm looking forward to make poet friends here... :)
Date: 5/16/2016 7:12:00 PM
Shameen, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shameen Imran
Date: 5/19/2016 3:02:00 AM
Hi! Thank you for your warm welcome and sorry for the late reply, I'm a bit busy with my exams these days. I'll definitely read your poems. There is nothing much to say about my poetic skills.....I just write when words come to me... :)

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