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Swans wings haiku

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  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:00:00 PM
    Eileen, that last line seals it off nicely and it is winning. Nice job in this demanding form! Thanks and regards Gerard

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 6:54:00 AM
    Hi Swans on the lakes in Tramore this morning. Another mind opener. Eamon