Swan Song

Lovelorn; My love, Breaking my heart, Left me forever to mourn. Forlorn; I Lament, Singing the blues, My pining heart pleads: Return! Dr. Ram Mehta's "Longing" contest.

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:07:00 AM

There's no greater longing than a lost love. Wonderful cinquain, Abdul...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:18:00 PM

Abdul, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:10:00 PM

very nice one, abdul. Put pleads with final s near the end of the second one! congrats for your win.

Abdul Malik
Date: 1/2/2015 3:29:00 PM

Got it! Thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:43:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 3:17:00 AM

Congrats on the win Abdul, I am happy this good work made it to the top...huggs

Abdul Malik
Date: 1/2/2015 3:33:00 PM

Thanks. Appreciate your comments.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 9:38:00 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Abdul

Abdul Malik
Date: 1/2/2015 3:31:00 PM

Thanks. Appreciate much. Wish the best of 2015 too.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/20/2014 4:49:00 PM

such an emotional write - I hope this does well for you you have captured the feeling so so well:-) Hugs jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 12/21/2014 12:17:00 PM

Thanks Jan. Appreciate your comments.