Get Your Premium Membership

Swan Lake

With laces tied, she is up and away With the glint of the moon on her steel blades The clink of metal as she leaves the ice Pirouette of glee as her soul takes flight Swirling and twirling, a bird on the wing With her scarlet skirt flared out in a ring Without any strings, she flies like a kite A vision of grace on a windless night Carving her masterpiece there on the lake Gaining more power with each breath she takes Joy beneath heaven on a starry night In a world of white drenched in golden light A girl with a dream and a pair of skates Swan in a ballet on a frozen lake. Author: Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/4/2016 8:58:00 PM
Hi Elaine, Goodness gracious, what a fine poem! Just so and evocative, with fantastic imagery.. the flows as smoothly and beautifully as the ice skater you describe! Cheers, Brian
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 3/5/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, and for your kind comments, Brian. Elaine
Date: 12/23/2015 10:41:00 AM
A mesmerizing sonnet so skillfully executed in perfect 12 syllable lines and fine rhyming. You always were the Queen Of The Form as is evidenced here. High artistry indeed!! Keith
Login to Reply
Bickerstaffe Avatar
Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/23/2015 10:50:00 AM
I'll check it out... If you can find it please take a look at 'A Plastic Bag.'
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 12/23/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thank you dear Keith. If it is sonnets you likes... A Winter Rose, is by far my best.
Date: 7/22/2015 3:52:00 PM
One of the prettiest sights seen, a beautiful ice queen dancing and twirling! Such grace and artistic acrobatics always inspire me when watching. Great sonnet my friend. A super 7 on this jewel.
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 7/22/2015 4:45:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Robert. Glad you enjoyed it. Elaine
Date: 7/22/2015 9:22:00 AM
A lovely sonnet, Elaine. Great imagery.
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 7/22/2015 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Cona. I love writing Sonnets. Elaine
Date: 5/13/2015 6:54:00 AM
Thank you f or dropping bye and for the kind comments, Carol.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/10/2015 9:01:00 AM
Loved the flow and visuals.
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 5/13/2015 6:55:00 AM
Thank you f or dropping by and for the kind comments, Carol.
Date: 2/16/2015 10:07:00 AM
A beauty for this frozen winter. Love, daver
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 2/19/2015 11:33:00 PM
Hi, Dave Thank you for dropping by. That swan once long ago was me. lol... Your friend, Elane
Date: 2/16/2015 8:31:00 AM
Wow gorgeous to read! The title too! Must be a sight to see and u portrayed it in such awesome style ah! So nice to read u again.
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 2/19/2015 11:34:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by my friend.And...thank you for the kind comment. bfn Elane
Date: 2/11/2015 5:37:00 PM
I'm enjoying an evening reading your work. This is beautiful Elaine. Hope you are well. Take care Love Lee
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 2/19/2015 11:31:00 PM
Hi, Lee, Thinking of you and looking forward to seeing you again when you return home. bfn Elaine
Date: 1/1/2015 12:11:00 PM
What a beauty you have painted with the beautiful swan in a mood to dance on the frozen lake. Outstandingly beautiful Elaine. Love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2014 7:22:00 PM
Snow and ballet on the lake.... breathtaking visions Elaine. I miss seeing snow. Wishing you the best New Year ever! Hugs, Connie
Login to Reply
Date: 12/25/2014 10:09:00 PM
Stopping by to visit one of my favorite poets, such a beautiful poem... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 12/25/2014 4:25:00 AM
Wow this is beautiful, Elaine! a sonnet after my heart; love the final couplet. // May I take this opportunity to wish you a blessed and merry Christmas and all the best for 2015. // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2014 5:01:00 PM
Beautiful....
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2014 4:52:00 AM
Lovely dreamy write, Merry Christmas, Elaine
Login to Reply
George   Avatar
Elaine George
Date: 12/24/2014 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, and Merry Christmas to you and yours, my friend. Elaine

Book: Shattered Sighs