Swan Lake

Pirouetting leaves, Wafting to the water's edge: Pizzicato breeze.

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Jo Bien

Date: 10/4/2009 2:40:00 PM

good write :) JB

James Fraser

Date: 9/29/2009 12:56:00 PM

Lovely title to a wonderful Senyru Raul >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/29/2009 10:10:00 AM

I will have a seat close to the music man and a glass of wine please. ~~~Magnificent Raul~~~ Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/29/2009 8:30:00 AM

I love the way you have incorporated music into your poetry Raul !! Beautiful!! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 9/29/2009 4:37:00 AM

Like the alliteration Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/28/2009 11:56:00 PM

Tough word play Raul, but you made it work..AWESOME...New fav......:JP]

Kate W

Date: 9/28/2009 11:51:00 PM

dancing in he wind beautiful...............kate

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/28/2009 6:27:00 PM

What A Beautiful way to describe Leaves dancing in the wind... Only you would have thought of it... Nature Own Opera/Ballet Lovely Raul MoonBee

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/28/2009 6:07:00 PM

dancing whirling leaves wafting filling the lonely pond with their dance,wow i love the Pizzicato breeze,this music played with fingertips,serene in its lonely pond,romantic in its melody--Yes ,Swan Lake-so Beautiful going to my favs,excellent write Raul--Charma

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/28/2009 5:44:00 PM

Raul, we posted similar poems at the same time. Cool! Love, BG