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drifting in and out or was it the other way around? floating away instead of towards what made sense both suspended in the air with only recognition as their measurement he wanted out she wanted in he pulled away her wish was for something more meaningful there they were trapped in something that held them captive too afraid to make the first move too afraid of what might happen suspended hanging onto promises both of them have forgotten with their feet halfway in the air still drifting in and out or was it the other way around?
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Date: 1/4/2012 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2011 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your early success in the contest. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:22:00 PM
Congratulations on getting thru to round two of Soup's contest with the kind of poetry you do best: love and its many gateways!
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Date: 11/20/2011 8:04:00 AM
W Neels, I like how the last stanza is a repeat of 1st...kinda like the topic itself...suspended in time we are. ;-)
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Date: 11/16/2011 9:49:00 PM
Hi..Wilma... how are you??? as for me..I'm stopping by to checkout all the poems,,, being featured... lol..i keep getting congrats..on my campfire poem.... Well i spot your poem first... you have yourself a very strong imagination... love the assumption here... congrats on your featured poem,, have a good night,..p.d.
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Date: 11/16/2011 7:05:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week, this is a lovely poem to read, something in the flow I think makes it easy to read, slightly melancholy topic, but greatly enjoyed none the less.
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Date: 11/16/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Wilma
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Date: 11/16/2011 12:47:00 AM
WOW, what a fantastic poem! Congrats for featured poem this week! You earned it for sure! (David)
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Date: 11/15/2011 8:12:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on featured poem this week on PS.. an amazing write to share with luv my friend..
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Date: 11/15/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congrats Wilma. Sometimes we don't see it until it's too late. This was a creative wonderful write and a deserving feature. Vince
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:25:00 AM
Very nice. Lee
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:34:00 PM
What I enjoyed the most are images and the way you have done it , Wilma
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:09:00 PM
what a great title for this image of them, Wilma. What made you think of this? You always come up with intreaguing stuff!!
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:15:00 PM
Wow, I know so many relationships that are hanging in "suspension" now, Wilma. Neither party has the courage to face change. Excellent free verse, dear. I'm trying to catch up a bit. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2011 11:12:00 AM
too late, you got me laughing again, hahaha! go love all of them balls lol :D you ball lover you hahaha! hug those balls for me will ya? ok ok i will try to stop laughing now
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:01:00 AM
wilms, so artistically presented in this very special way with fantastic images. you baffled me and i like that... wow! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:42:00 AM
Ah, the mysteries and foncusion that love can bring! Sure can be puzzling, yup never do know which side is up, which side is down, or is it the other way around?? Very cool write...mwahugs missy :D
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:51:00 AM
Wilma u constantly amaze me.. this is another fav for me luv.. so extended in expressions and the emotion is super charged luv.. is it for a contest? good luck if so..it should be a winner..
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:36:00 AM
I guess that's why some people stay together. hopefully in time, they'll realize that it's not meaningful anymore and call it quits, or, find new meaning in their relationship to propel them out of this "place" good depiction of this :)
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:40:00 AM
Yes, I think we've all been there. Clever piece, Wilma.
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:59:00 AM
Love can be confusing and cause friction along the way. A very interesting write with some strong imagery. Well done. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:55:00 AM
hmmm, it does sound confusing,Wilma. Brings back memories and I hope they stay just memories! Sounds like time to back up and regroup! Choose to have a tremendous day, Wilma. :)
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