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Survivor

Life's waves washed me upon your Island shore Tossed by rolling seas, a torn heart maroon You found me, the sea and sand no more Gave caring love in your sheltered lagoon I had nothing, no jeweled treasure to share No diamonds bright, rubies red, fragile heart You clothed me in reason, a coat I wear For this gift, a promise, we'll never part My love though humble, is forever free I place it well without reserve or fear On your heart's altar, I leave a plea And only ask, you keep it well my dear Life had cast me from its brigantine deck Now found, survivor of my heart's shipwreck For the contest Islands sponsored by Anthony Slausen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/15/2014 10:05:00 AM
Good morning Frederic, .. Congratulations on Anthony's Island contest. ~SKAT~
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/15/2014 10:59:00 AM
thank you my friend
Date: 3/10/2014 6:06:00 PM
Nicely written Frederic. Congratulations on your fine win - Connie
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 6:44:00 PM
thank you for your kindness
Date: 3/10/2014 5:20:00 PM
I adored this the first time I saw it. Congrats. Probably my favorite in the whole contest.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Andrea my poetic friend that means a lot
Date: 3/10/2014 7:51:00 AM
congrats on your success...I do enjoy a good metaphor..BG
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Barbara for reading and yes I felt for this contest a metaphor was the way to go, but well see..
Date: 3/10/2014 7:02:00 AM
hi Frederic good pen congrats on win hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/10/2014 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Shadow for reading and for your kindness
Date: 3/8/2014 12:15:00 PM
I love the metaphor Frederic ...Well done.....Tim
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/8/2014 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Tim for reading and your kindness
Date: 3/7/2014 10:44:00 PM
Looks like a great entry for Anthony's contest.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/7/2014 10:48:00 PM
Thank you Robert for reading and your kindness
Date: 3/7/2014 10:28:00 PM
what a lovely and imaginative way to do the contest theme. Pure metaphor and very well crafted!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/7/2014 10:38:00 PM
thank you my poetic friend for your kindness

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