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Survival Kit

The rusted latch cuts chewed finger tips. Pryed open, needled jabbed emotions lay inside. Grab the peanut butter crackered hugs, Nurture the starved soul. Chocolate kissed squares await to be devoured. Sip bottled water enhanced with "I love you`s". Replenish the survival kit for lifes next survivor. Lock it tight . Don`t lose the key. You may be back with company.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Robin. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Date: 6/2/2010 6:05:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Date: 5/4/2010 7:32:00 PM

Interesting perspective and creative imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 5/3/2010 6:29:00 PM

Congratulations Robin on your worthy poem feature this week, Agape, Moses

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/3/2010 6:24:00 PM

Congrats Robin on your edible "Survivor Kit" being featured. Vince

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/3/2010 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/3/2010 9:08:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2010 3:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Robin. Love,Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 12/31/2009 12:28:00 AM

Full of lovely imagery Robin.Rgds Brian thanks for your welcome comments.

Date: 12/30/2009 3:11:00 PM

Good use of imagey for a creative view. I really like the 4th line. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments. Happy New Year! Keep on writing! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2009 7:33:00 AM

Interesting survival kit. Keep the pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/28/2009 6:15:00 PM

I can relate here, Robin. Great write! Thank you for sharing this. You are truly talented! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Truly appreciated! Peace and love, Audrey

P Sheart

Date: 12/27/2009 4:44:00 PM

Hi Robin, Been here too. Think we all have at one time or another. Truly enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today!! Truly enjoyed. Thanks for your most welcome comment on my poem, you're so sweet. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2009 3:06:00 PM

I enjoy food poems, even though the food was for emotions. Loved the way you ended this one! andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/27/2009 9:02:00 AM

Interesting lines Robin and I have been through all of the above myself... so I can relate... great write to share... thankxxx your comments are most welcome and kind... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..