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Survival

A lowly blossom, striving to sustain her beauty in the early morning mist, the crocus, craving moisture to maintain her stoic fight 'gainst winter's iron fist. A lowly mollusc slithers 'neath his shell, he slowly weaves, and leaves a silver trail, antennae primed and ready for the knell, when sparrows poke and peck his coat of mail. Creatures and plants in the midst of the fray, searching for sustenance, dying of thirst, staving off hunger, say, is there a way to count ourselves blessed, not feeble and cursed? predator, prey, both the fittest, the weakest, who will prevail? I would bet on the shrewdest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/28/2012 6:35:00 PM
I see you are in touch with the simple things of life too Keith; nature has so many facets and lends iitself to poetry perfectly as you did in this sweet poem.
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:26:00 AM
A very thought provoking and interesting write... Great imagery.
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:57:00 PM
Nice use of form! Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2012 2:20:00 PM
Your choice of imagery brings beauty and depth to this piece, Keith! "A lowly blossom...her beauty in the eary morning mist"...oh, makes one almost feel to reach out and touch it. Still, to do so might bruise its fagile beauty. Always the romantic poet, you trail the feeling of love and compassion throughout your verses. Best wishes to you and yours, Love, Mikki
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/14/2012 2:47:00 PM
Thank so much! I am most grateful.

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