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Survival

The path narrowed till Stepping on each others' toes Was the way forward.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2012 11:01:00 AM
Nice write, but this is more of a "senryu" than a "haiku".
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Saika F.
Date: 2/27/2012 11:14:00 AM
thanks! i had the number of syllables wrong i the first line, changed it now:)

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