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'surrounded By Storm Clouds'

she lifted her head her eyes heaven bound blue skies with no clouds around the tears in her eyes have gone remembering the good times brings a smile to her face it is okay to be surrounded by storm clouds in the midst of all the miasma uncertainty and pain you sometimes see things so clear it's like looking at them through someone else's eyes The Potter needed her all mushy and wet for her to be fragile to mold and shape her into His perfect diagram
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Date: 11/28/2011 9:14:00 PM
Wilma, i love your spirit here.. and I know how you feel... the storm will leave... her light will always be there... thanks for your comment... always,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this awesome poem!!!--Lori
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Date: 11/14/2011 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in John's contest.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Wilma
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:29:00 PM
The last stanza brought it all together. Great work Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:03:00 PM
Awesome finish, Wilma your last stanza, and a great build up to the finish. Congratulations on a worthy second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/13/2011 2:19:00 PM
refining her thru a refiner's fire. congrats on this spiritual lesson...pain does make us grow...if we want it to...all the best, Miss Wilma. Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:24:00 AM
Ah, the entire picture comes to view-- very beautiful and inspiring , missy :) Yes, everything happens for a reason, sometimes things don't make sense at first but eventually they do, as long as one has faith :) Wonderful poem, missy ;) and hehe You know what I meant ;) I am just crazy since you mentioned the bottle being a comfort heehee ;) mwahugs-- go eat chips -- crunchy, salty Yummy mummy chips!! mwahugs
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Date: 11/12/2011 9:27:00 PM
wow! Wilma,, i love the way you laid image with her eyes and clouds.. I can't wait to see the statue .. Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA
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Date: 11/12/2011 4:09:00 PM
My check your Most dear friend,check your soup ,mail God Bless and Love...Taz
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Date: 11/12/2011 1:30:00 PM
Amazing work today Wilma, this has such angles and curves to it, a perfect shape of poetry as only you can do... with love Michael
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Date: 11/12/2011 12:28:00 PM
what a cool way to describe humbling oneself before God and passing thru sacrifice before reaching perfection. There is so much pain to pass thru in life. Not everyone holds up. A great verse, wilma. So happy sabbath coming up soon for you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/12/2011 9:44:00 AM
* “Reaching Into My Own Soul * To Gently Hold Your Precious Hearts Words As A Rose * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Wilma * Fragrant Is The Touch & Even More So This Place * Wherein I Find Beauty Amid The Light of Your Eyes * Perfume & The Sun Is Shining Bright Today * Thank You * Tis Always A Joy to Behold Your Loveliness * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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