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Surrender To the Holy Spirit

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Oh, Holy Spirit such joy in thy numen name, Amidst a plentiful paraclete of a burning flame… Stormy skies subdue as you enter with a tame, Dropping pearls from heaven an almighty acclaim. White Doves follow your peaceful playful presence, Cozy comfort in your propelling passionate presents… Within eyes captivated by your lasting luminescence, Light of love emanating from a floral fluorescence. Omnipotent orchestral vibes of the supreme symphony, Thus the universe prepares for your majestic majesty… Illuminating portals of faith upon a bewildering brilliancy, Providing providence throughout our everlasting infinity. Nov.28.2019 Holy Spirit Poetry Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/23/2019 1:56:00 PM

The call of Divinity beautifully expressed as only your unique quill-speak can utter, O Master of Alliteration. Elegant and evocative poetry, WW! Love and happy holidays.

Hello There

Date: 12/19/2019 12:32:00 AM

This is beautiful, ^WW^ ~ absolutely.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2019 7:42:00 AM

Hi WW, First of all I must say, your title alone caught my attention. I was not disappointed. Amazing content,flow and rhymes. You get the reasons to "surrender to holy spirit" Excellent job. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day bro:-) Alexis

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/7/2019 11:40:00 PM

Contratulations on your win. Lovely write with beautiful alliteration.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/3/2019 9:09:00 PM

This just stunning, ^WW^, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Na Na

Date: 12/3/2019 8:52:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem W.W.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/3/2019 8:43:00 PM

Heavenly alliteration! Congratulations, WW!

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/1/2019 1:54:00 PM

wow...this is a gorgeous write and wonderful entry for the contest...love this, one, it shines perfectly... :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/29/2019 8:42:00 AM

I love this write my friend - God is Omniscient and the Holy Spirit heralds his presence and appears on His coming! Wonderful Brilliant Superb! Hugs and blessings, Jenn.

Bobby May

Date: 11/28/2019 10:37:00 PM

WOW ^WW^ you flew high on this one!! well done big brother ^LW^ over and out!!

Na Na

Date: 11/28/2019 10:13:00 PM

HI David very good entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest

David Mchattie

Date: 11/28/2019 9:32:00 PM

Wow. A majestic write my friend. Such imagery. Have a good holiday.